I submitted the wrong Haiku to the list.
On that post to Stan, I accidentally sent a first draft Haiku which doesn't
follow the meter of the form. I cut and pasted the wrong one. Sorry! ;-]
It read:

Destinations of life
Chicken crosses asphalt stream
Becomes the other side

It should have read:

Life's destination
Chicken crosses asphalt stream
Becomes other side

As you can see, the first draft was 6,7,6 instead of 5,7,5.
Still, gives you a peek into how I compose.


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